more changes

Story board again-lots of changes from Megan Buckley on Vimeo.



new storyboard- I added in more to the beginning (girl being shy, them conversing. him serenading her) and did little changes in the middle and at the end (they now kiss at the end.)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tLvTw-tweWGXITM8Tv9HUy2PAtmoevXnjdzP_tb2lB0/edit

9/11

So over the weekend I worked on the story board some more - I added more cuts, and little changes to the character interaction. I also worked on the overall look.
I got both frames, the guy character has been added in, and
I worked on the hands ,  i also cut the girl and guy's character into its separate layers

sil storyboard edited again from Megan Buckley on Vimeo.

also I did calendar updates. I still want to split the scenes between this class and my senior studio class, and to have the animation completed by first semester.



I also changed the script to match the storyboard- Silhouette Script

9/6

What did I do???

in the final look I change the vanity to look more like vanity, more detail in vanity, and girl

I made the finished look of the hands that take the frames off the wall 

I couldnt find a frame i liked (that was free/stock) so before i buy an image online, this weekend  Im going to go frame hunting and take photos of them. Im also going to make the assets for the piece this weekend to be approved on tuesday

first opening shot- her picture in middle of wall instead of to the left 

I thought about the copy cat scene- I changed the animatic so that the characters are not doing the same motions at the same time instead the girl does a movement then the guy goes. I also added other limbs moving. The first time is only arms, the second is arms and head, the last is arms, head, and legs. I hoping it will come across as copy catting more..... 

I also decided that they would still end up in the trash together, I feel like them ending up in a frame together would be to predictable and also if they are bought by 2 separate people how do they end up in the same frame.....  I also feel that people dont always recognize the value in antiques. So they could easily be thrown away. Also silhouette pictures were, in the past, one of the cheapest ways to record a persons likeness - there are just so many out there!  But they do range in price and this is most likely do to who the subject or artist was and also the method used to create the silhouette. 

here is the video updated- https://vimeo.com/48932481

also the updated look- Im thinking about playing with the line quality and the color on the hands a bit more, also the second set of hands is going to have longer nails and a ring 

9/4

idea of final look

over the weekend I made a rough animatic, the final look, and changed a little of my script

test storyboard from Megan Buckley on Vimeo.

class review-
first opening shot- her picture in middle of wall instead of side, change vanity to look more like vanity, more detail in vanity, girl, and guy. they want to see the finished look of the hands that take the frames off the wall and the other guy's frame.
Think about changing copy cat scene as its not coming across as well in the animatic as it did in the script. maybe they end up composited together instead off in the trash????

30th

So over wednesday I've written my script (its below), I also wrote my calendar on google and linked it (post before this). Since I am conjoining this class and my senior studio I will be doing the boy's scene, the scenes with both frames, and the scenes where its only the girls frame (not close up). In the other class I will do the Girl's close up scenes, the paying for the frame, and the trashcan scenes.
Story Structure break down

Act 1-

Inciting incident: the man tries to befriend the girl

Plot Point: the girl invites the man to tea

Act 2-

Midpoint: they realize nothing they do will get them out of their frames

Plot Point 2: Man gets sold

Act 3-

Climax: girl is taken out of frame

Denouement: she lands by the silhouette of man, they hold hands

SCRIPT


ACT I     INT . WALL OF ANTIQUE SHOP, SILHOUETTE PICTURE OF A GIRL HANGS ON WALL. NAILS POKE OUT AROUND HER LEAVING HER AS THE LAST PICTURE LEFT ON THE WALL


A silhouette picture of a girl hangs on a old wallpapered wall. She sits in front of a vanity, bored she rests her head on top of her hand leaning on the vanity. 

Two hands holding the frame of a man holding a gun and wearing a back pack enter the screen and place the frame on a nail beside the girl's frame. After hanging the frame the two hands exit the screen

CLOSE UP OF BOY'S FRAME

The man puts down his gun and bag, opens the bad and brings out a chair, he sits down and rest his head in his hands. After a few second the man lifts his head up and nods as if to say hello

CLOSE UP OF GIRL'S FRAME

the girl puts crosses her arms, tilts her head back, and ignores the man. 

SHOT OF BOTH FRAMES

man slumps his head back down on his hands.
The girl reaches in a drawer of her vanity and pulls out powder and starts to powder her face
The man starts to mimic her actions
The girl stops in the mid action, starting to realize what the man was doing. She moves her arm up then down and watches the man who also moves his arm up then down. The girl puts the powdering ball down and crosses her arms, the man follows suit.
The girl throws her hands down to her lap in frustration, and once again the man does too.
The girl starts to pat her legs and stomp her feet in a pattern, the man continues to copy cat her. The girl does another pattern this time a little bit more difficult and a little faster, and again the man mimics her.  Getting frustrated the girl does another even faster, but this time the man messes up. He messes up so bad the girl grabs her stomach with one hand, points at him with the other and start to laugh at the man. The man joins in laughing at himself.

CLOSE UP OF GIRL'S FRAME

The girl puts her powder back in vanity and pulls out a small table, a tea pot, and two cups setting them on the table. She pours tea into both cups, sets the tea pot down, then motions to a tea cup inviting the man to join her.

ACT II      CLOSE UP OF BOY'S FRAME

The man gets up dusts himself of and walks toward the girl's frame. The man runs into the side of his frame and falls down. The man gets up goes to the edge of his frame, puts his hands up trying to feel a way out, the man then stars to bang his fists against the wall.

CLOSE UP OF GIRL'S FRAME

The girl runs to her frame and also starts to push against it's side. she goes to her vanity and pulls out a bike, hops on, and pedals full speed toward the frame and crashes against its side.

CLOSE UP OF BOY'S FRAME

The man goes to his bag and pulls out a hatchet, goes to the frame, and starts to pound away at its side, but again nothing happens

SHOT OF BOTH FRAMES

The man motions for the girl to go further back in her frame. As the girl is moving back then man grabs his gun and once she is out of the way he aims to ward the side of his frame and fires. The bullet ricochets around his frame and into his chair, knocking it over.
The girl moves forward, kicks the table and slumps into a chair. The guy moves toward the frame and sits against its wall in defeat.

CLOSE UP OF BOYS FRAME

The man pops his head up, quickly gets up goes to his bag and reaches inside. He starts to pull a really big object out of his bag. The object turns out to be a door. The man leans it against the side of the frame, opens it, walks though and immediately appears on the other side of his frame. The man stomps over to the door and slams it shut.

CLOSE UP OF GIRL'S FRAME

The girl's face is in her hands and her shoulders are shaking from crying. she looks up a bit and blows her nose. Slowly she gets up from her chair and starts to put everything back in her vanity. Once every thing is put away she glance toward the man's frame. The girl does a double take and rushes to the wall of her frame

SHOT OF WALL WITH FRAMES THIS TIME ONLY GIRL'S IS THERE

The girl slumps to her knees as she realizes the man's frame is gone. she then slowly gets up and returns to the chair in front of her vanity.

ACT III     CLOSE UP OF GIRL'S FRAME

As the girl sits leaning on her vanity with her head in her hand, a customer's hands picks her frame of the wall.


SHOT OF THE BACK OF THE GIRL'S FRAME SITTING ON A CHECK OUT COUNTER

The cutomer hands over the money for the frame, then opens the frame grabs the girl

LOOKING OUT FORM TRASH CAN

The customer's hand comes in to view holding the girl. The customer drops the girl in

LOOKING INTO TRASH CAN

The girl's cut out form is laying on bits of trash but beside her is the man's cut out form. The girl looks up at the man then reaches over and grabs his hand.  

calendar

New Idea!

so I thought about my review and I decided - to go ahead and do the project in after effects. 

I also changed my story idea-  2 silhouette pictures in an antique store fall in love but cant get to each other because of there frames. they try different ways to reach each other but none of them work. Then they get sold (at different times to different buyers),  their buyers' keep only the frames and throw the silhouettes away -but luckly in the same trashcan- where they get to be together moving from paper to paper free from their frames

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