Thursday, March 29, 2012

new take


a different take on the tale of rumpelstiltskin 

lies and Greed gets you no where

a girl captures a creature to use his skills to become queen
but her lie is becomes known and the creature gets the credit instead. 

In a poor run down kingdom
A girl sees a creature turn dead crops to living crops she captures him. If you do this for me I will let you go.
She tells the king she can do this task
He says if she can shell be queen
In a field the girl has the creature turn the crops from dead to alive
But when he was done she didn’t let him go – for he would give her a source of riches always
To the kings promise she was to be queen but upon there wedding the king wanted to show the land how she made there kingdom prosper- this time in front of everyone a dead potted flower
She couldn’t give it life without the creature –she was reveled as a fraud, and had to give the credit to the creature
The woman was out casted from the kingdom and the creature was rejoiced as the savior of the lands  

I stil want them to look some thing like 

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